poet Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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Because I Love Her

Because I love her,
I will work neath the sun;
I will be the breadwinner,
Getting the nice job done.

Because I love her,
I'll be loyal and kind;
Ignoring temptation,
Never leave her behind.

Because I love her,
I'll warm her in the rain;
I won't be cruel and brutal,
I'll never cause her pain.

Because I love her,
I will give her no harm;
I'll always let her feel
My embrace sweet and warm.

Because I love her,
She deserves due respect;
I'll understand her fault,
For no one's born perfect.

Because I love her,
I won't let her get tired;
I'll help her carry the load,
Since time has not expired.

Because I love her,
I'll shield her all the time;
I'll keep her safe and sound,
During the vilest clime.

Because I love her,
Hers is small discretion;
So I will make it sure,
There's no big decision.

Willing to suffer even if I
Succumb to wear and tear;
I'll go with her to a grocery store,
Yes, because I love her.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Poem Edited: Saturday, February 16, 2019

Form: Quatrain


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  • Leeann Azzopardi (6/11/2020 2:15:00 PM)

    this poem reminds me of pablo neudra. The dedication to true love Bravo!

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  • Gary James SmithGary James Smith (4/14/2020 10:21:00 AM)

    Yes the utmost of sacrifices...going to the grocery store....definetly food for thought here...

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  • Anjandev Roy (3/27/2020 9:16:00 AM)

    An excellent piece.....dear poet. anjandev roy.

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (1/8/2020 5:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful write on theme love. Romantic with a jovial ending. Great rhyme scheme. And very nice refrain usage 10/10

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (12/12/2019 3:39:00 AM)

    And a brilliant poem gets born
    Because I lobe her eve and morn...

    And let me thank poet mihaela Pirjol whose page helped me read this poem.
    Excellent poem, dear poet.

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  • Luz HanaiiLuz Hanaii (12/5/2019 10:15:00 AM)

    This shows much appreciation and love for your wife, I'm sure she values all of your dedication. TFS

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (11/26/2019 2:26:00 AM)

    This poem is well-constructed in wonderful stanzas of rhythm and melody: the repetition of 'because I love her' shows the depth of your love. Yes, this is a great poem!

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(11/27/2019 10:43:00 PM)

    Thank you so much, dear Ma’am
    Mihaela for the sweet and lovely comment🙏😊❤️

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  • Maxim Muyu (11/25/2019 10:43:00 AM)

    nice composed poem, I like it.

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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/1/2019 9:04:00 AM)

    Love has no reason but it's reason of beauty everywhere.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(11/27/2019 10:41:00 PM)

    Thanks, sir Akhtar for the wonderful comment🙏😊👌

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  • Nobody StarsNobody Stars (9/16/2019 3:36:00 PM)

    interesting, but also scary, it reminds you of the opposite

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  • Naida Nepascua SupnetNaida Nepascua Supnet (8/15/2019 7:57:00 AM)

    I like the rhyme, plus it makes the readers smile knowing how you are head over heels in love with her. Salute.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:16:00 PM)

    Thank you so much, dear ate Naida
    for the sweet feedback🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍

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  • Uche NwanzeUche Nwanze (8/5/2019 7:56:00 AM)

    Nice one, ' because I love her'. but the problem can you keep your word. It is one thing to say and it is another to keep your promise.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:15:00 PM)

    Thanks. I agree with your insightful comment, Uche🙏🙏🙏👌👌👌

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  • Julia Luber (7/25/2019 8:15:00 AM)

    Clear beautiful poetry and definition of love we sometimes take for granted or think means other things.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:14:00 PM)

    Thank you so much, dear Ma’am Julia for the lovely comment 🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍

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  • Malvikas Poet ChannelMalvikas Poet Channel (7/24/2019 1:23:00 AM)

    Nice dedication towards your love sir.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:12:00 PM)

    Thanks, Vaidyanathan for the wonderful comment 🙏🙏🙏👌👌👌

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  • Chan MongolChan Mongol (6/24/2019 10:58:00 AM)

    Very academic for men. The poem strengthened the true love and the capacity to accept troubles to be considerate as the real man. The honorable poet penned very well as a teaching material. I love it. Thumb up for such a masterpiece.10 for the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:10:00 PM)

    Thanks, sir Chan for the fabulous feedback 🙏🙏🙏👌👌👌

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (5/29/2019 1:03:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem my friend! My great pleasure reading this elegant piece of poetry with sparkling poetic expression again and again!

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:09:00 PM)

    Thanks, my good friend Dillip for the uplifting words🙏🙏🙏👌👌👌

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  • Ashek SarkerAshek Sarker (5/27/2019 10:19:00 AM)

    very nicely written...thanks for sharing

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  • Avid Fan (4/28/2019 7:55:00 PM)

    Because I love her,
    I will work neath the sun;
    I will be the breadwinner,
    Getting the nice job done.

    A truly classic poem, sir Bernard.

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  • Philo YanPhilo Yan (4/9/2019 1:45:00 AM)

    So many reasons to love when one is ready to love. Thank you for sharing.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:07:00 PM)

    Thanks, dear Ma’am Philo for the precise comment 🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (4/3/2019 10:40:00 PM)

    Because I love her,
    She deserves due respect;
    I'll understand her fault,
    For no one's born perfect.......touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(8/15/2019 6:06:00 PM)

    Thanks, sir Kumarmani for the inspiration 🙏🙏🙏

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