poet Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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Visions Of Fame And Fortune

V-isions of fame and fortune
A-re deep inside your mind;
N-ever let them fade,
N-or let them stay behind.
I-n the visions of fame and fortune, dreams are clearly seen;
E-arly eighth of October, your goal is a perfect scene.

B-uying house and cars
R-emains in your sight;
A-im at the glorious life,
Z-one of gold is bright.
I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion;
L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune.

Topic(s) of this poem: birthday

Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 8, 2017
Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 3, 2020

Form: Acrostic


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Selected as Poem Of The Day (October 14,2017)
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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/26/2020 1:57:00 PM)

    I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion;
    L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune. wriitng about a great theme. to achieve greatness. t ony

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  • ROBERT M SMITH (5/13/2020 9:01:00 PM)

    A well worked poem, Bernard.

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  • Anjandev Roy (2/26/2020 10:09:00 AM)

    Excellent write. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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  • Michael WalkerMichael Walker (10/28/2019 7:36:00 PM)

    I have had visions of fame and fortune and I have bought a good car. To buy a house is more difficult in my country,
    but I keep hoping. Many of us had to 'fight poverty' and leave it behind, if we could. A penetrating, psychological poem.

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  • Dominic WindramDominic Windram (8/3/2019 2:12:00 AM)

    Great poem...thanks so much for sharing!

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  • Jane Campion (7/12/2019 1:03:00 AM)

    A lovely positive write.

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  • Jennifer BirchallJennifer Birchall (5/23/2019 12:43:00 AM)

    A great poem of dreaming big, and reap the rewards of working hard. Wonderful dear Bernard.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (5/9/2019 7:44:00 AM)

    V-isions of fame and fortune
    A-re deep inside your mind; ...impressive beginning. A beautiful poem in acrostic form has been astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (5/7/2019 9:15:00 AM)

    Lovely acrostic with a great message. Dream and work towards wealth and put it to good use.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (3/26/2019 5:14:00 AM)

    A brilliant poem my friend! My great pleasure reading it repeatedly!

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  • Philo YanPhilo Yan (3/19/2019 5:32:00 AM)

    Good composition and well thought out.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(3/20/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    Thanks, Ma'am Philo for your wonderful comment.......

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (1/4/2019 12:59:00 AM)

    B-uying house and cars
    R-emains in your sight;

    Remarkable acrostic lines, dear Bernard................

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(3/20/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    Thanks, dear Cheryl for your fantastic words of support......

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (1/3/2019 12:44:00 AM)

    B-uying house and cars
    R-emains in your sight;
    A-im at the glorious life,
    Z-one of gold is bright.
    I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion;
    L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune.

    Magnificent acrostic, dear Bernie............................

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (1/1/2019 4:55:00 PM)

    V-isions of fame and fortune
    A-re deep inside your mind;
    N-ever let them fade,
    N-or let them stay behind.
    I-n the visions of fame and fortune, dreams are clearly seen;
    E-arly eighth of October, your goal is a perfect scene.

    Exceptional acrostic, dear Bernard......................

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:54:00 PM)

    This is truly one of your gems, Bernard❤️❤️❤️
    Keep it up😍😍😍

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:54:00 PM)

    This is truly one of your gems, Bernard❤️❤️❤️
    Keep it up😍😍😍

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:52:00 PM)

    This is quite lovely, Bernard❤️❤️❤️
    I’m profuse in my thanks.....

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (12/30/2018 4:27:00 PM)

    Beautifully crafted, Bernard.
    I love it and I enjoy this fantastic acrostic❤️❤️❤️

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (12/27/2018 12:20:00 AM)

    Another splendid acrostic chosen as poem of the day October 24,2017.........

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  • Michael WalkerMichael Walker (11/6/2018 6:09:00 PM)

    I like both the photo (your daughter?) and the acrostic poem, which you are bringing back into fashion.
    I like buying cars and houses, after renting them for so many years.

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(11/29/2018 1:25:00 AM)

    Those houses and cars are prime necessities of life.........................

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