Bernard F. Asuncion

Gold Star - 484,527 Points (July 30,1967 / Subic, Philippines)

Visions Of Fame And Fortune - Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

V-isions of fame and fortune
A-re deep inside your mind;
N-ever let them fade,
N-or let them stay behind.
I-n the visions of fame and fortune, dreams are clearly seen;
E-arly eighth of October, your goal is a perfect scene.

B-uying house and cars
R-emains in your sight;
A-im at the glorious life,
Z-one of gold is bright.
I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion;
L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune.

Topic(s) of this poem: birthday

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Visions Of Fame And Fortune by Bernard F. Asuncion

  • Jane Campion (7/12/2019 1:03:00 AM)

    A lovely positive write. (Report)Reply

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  • Jennifer Birchall (5/23/2019 12:43:00 AM)

    A great poem of dreaming big, and reap the rewards of working hard. Wonderful dear Bernard. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/9/2019 7:44:00 AM)

    V-isions of fame and fortune
    A-re deep inside your mind; ...impressive beginning. A beautiful poem in acrostic form has been astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.
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  • Savita Tyagi (5/7/2019 9:15:00 AM)

    Lovely acrostic with a great message. Dream and work towards wealth and put it to good use. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (3/26/2019 5:14:00 AM)

    A brilliant poem my friend! My great pleasure reading it repeatedly! (Report)Reply

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  • Philo Yan (3/19/2019 5:32:00 AM)

    Good composition and well thought out. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(3/20/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    Thanks, Ma'am Philo for your wonderful comment.......

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  • Cheryl Tutaan (1/4/2019 12:59:00 AM)

    B-uying house and cars
    R-emains in your sight;

    Remarkable acrostic lines, dear Bernard................
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    Bernard F. Asuncion(3/20/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    Thanks, dear Cheryl for your fantastic words of support......

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  • Cheryl Tutaan (1/3/2019 12:44:00 AM)

    B-uying house and cars
    R-emains in your sight;
    A-im at the glorious life,
    Z-one of gold is bright.
    I-t's time to fight poverty and bring it to oblivion;
    L-et your eyes view the visions of fame and fortune.

    Magnificent acrostic, dear Bernie............................
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (1/1/2019 4:55:00 PM)

    V-isions of fame and fortune
    A-re deep inside your mind;
    N-ever let them fade,
    N-or let them stay behind.
    I-n the visions of fame and fortune, dreams are clearly seen;
    E-arly eighth of October, your goal is a perfect scene.

    Exceptional acrostic, dear Bernard......................
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:54:00 PM)

    This is truly one of your gems, Bernard❤️❤️❤️
    Keep it up😍😍😍
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:54:00 PM)

    This is truly one of your gems, Bernard❤️❤️❤️
    Keep it up😍😍😍
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/31/2018 5:52:00 PM)

    This is quite lovely, Bernard❤️❤️❤️
    I’m profuse in my thanks.....
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/30/2018 4:27:00 PM)

    Beautifully crafted, Bernard.
    I love it and I enjoy this fantastic acrostic❤️❤️❤️
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  • Cheryl Tutaan (12/27/2018 12:20:00 AM)

    Another splendid acrostic chosen as poem of the day October 24,2017......... (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Walker (11/6/2018 6:09:00 PM)

    I like both the photo (your daughter?) and the acrostic poem, which you are bringing back into fashion.
    I like buying cars and houses, after renting them for so many years.
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    Bernard F. Asuncion(11/29/2018 1:25:00 AM)

    Those houses and cars are prime necessities of life.........................

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  • Michael Walker (11/6/2018 6:08:00 PM)

    I like both the photo (your daughter?) and the acrostic poem, which you are bringing back into fashion. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(11/29/2018 1:23:00 AM)

    Thanks, Michael for the inspiring comment....................

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (10/18/2018 5:23:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem! Brilliantly penned my friend! My great pleasure reading this fabulous piece of work time and again! (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(11/29/2018 1:16:00 AM)

    Thanks, Dillip for fine feedback.....................

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (9/26/2018 9:36:00 AM)

    A very moving acrostic write.
    Yes, we have to fight poverty
    and bring it to oblivion.
    Superbly penned.10++++
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    Bernard F. Asuncion(11/29/2018 1:14:00 AM)

    Thanks, ate Rose for the splendid statement................

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (8/6/2018 1:27:00 AM)

    A great acrostic poem my friend! My pleasure revisiting it! (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(9/5/2018 2:22:00 AM)

    Thank you, Dillip for your unceasing support......................

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  • Wieslaw Musialowski (7/25/2018 3:18:00 AM)

    Nice poem, Bernard. Greetings from Poland. (Report)Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion(9/5/2018 2:22:00 AM)

    Thanks, Wieslaw for such sublime comment...................

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 8, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, May 10, 2019


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