Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, October 20, 2018

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How would it be to stay young forever?
Eternal youth is just not meant to be.
Longing for such can make it so never.
Perhaps exceptions could be made for me.
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Cowboy Ron Williams 15 March 2023

This poem really strikes a deep chord with me. I love it! To my favorites!

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Rebecca Navarre 06 January 2019

This is very beautifully sewn! .. With very beautiful sentiments! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Pranab K Chakraborty 20 October 2018

Inspiring trick to play with PH..... Congratulation your commitment for poetry to communicate with reader! ... Intense the helplessness of old age drawn by word with skill hand. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 20 October 2018

Thank you, Pranab. I appreciate the comment.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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