Broken Heart Poem by Scarlette Romero

Broken Heart



You gave me a broken heart,
I can't believe we fell apart,
I'm now alone,
Just waiting by the phone,
And you know that, Baby,
But you kow I've been thinking lately,
That it didn't have to be like this,
We could have stayed in an endless bliss,
But no,
You thought that we had too much fun,
And said we had to have time on our own which made me run,
I didn't want to see your face,
But now i want your warm embrace,
I miss you more than anything,
I want you more than anything,
But again you gave me a broken heart.
And again we fell apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 30 July 2009

You are expressing your feelings and that is what poetry is all about. You do well according to choosing your rhymes and saying what you really want to say. The ryhmes don't distract.

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June Feir-Cruz 19 April 2009

Catherine, Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem FEAR. I am from the Philippines originally and now live in the US. I enjoy your work as well. I love Broken Heart. Keep on writing...PS: Barbara Terry is a dear friend of mine and I can see she is also a fan of yours :)

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Hazem Al Jaber 19 April 2009

sadly and well done.. don`t give up..one day you will get what you dream about.. one day, , one will cure your heart and give you all what you deserve, , beautiful one.. hazem al..

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Barbara Terry 16 April 2009

Love is a very fickle emotion Cathrene. It digs deep in the heart, and when it fails it rips holes straight through not only the heart, but the soul as well. This is a sad poem of failing love, and who knows, maybe one day just out of the blue there will be Prince Charming. You never know because it could happen. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara

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