Broken Heart Poem by Batool Abdulhafid

Broken Heart

Rating: 4.5


I shall step on my heart and walk away
I shall close my eyes & rub these tears away
I shall dream not about you, for you are not destined to me
I shall feel happy, for your happiness is my happiness even if you are with somebody else & not me
I shall cry not over who sold me free
I shall live this life with a hope smile even if you are miles away
I shall not feel empty for God is always there for me
I shall fear not for God will always be next to me
And before I set you free
I'd like to tell you that you are the greatest thing that had ever happened to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 17 January 2012

A mixture of sad, happy and love and it's a perfect spoken to reveal all out from heart..when heart is broken what the content inside goes out and tell what the feeling as it shattered in chest..nice write Batoo, i guess it was a good coincident to read this poem while i listening a song my heart is broken by evanescence...you will be fine and regenerate your heart sooner! _Unwritten Soul

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Batool Abdulhafid 26 January 2012

Thanks Unwritten Soul, I'm pretty good.. =) [ you are the 1st one to comment on my 1st poem in this site ^_^ ]

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Saadat Tahir 27 January 2012

I shall cry not over who sold me free... v touching..nice welcome to PH :)

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Batool Abdulhafid 28 January 2012

Thanks Saadat ^_^...........

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Batool. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Utsav Patel 23 May 2013

I like it... Keep writing batool... Read some of my poems... You'll like it... :)

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Nadood Al Nasser 12 February 2012

so beautiful, just amazing.............. i shall say u r a very talented person and i shall also say that ur poem is completely pure

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Batool Abdulhafid 28 January 2012

thanks Jahan Zeb :) thats sweet frm ya

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Jahan Zeb 28 January 2012

Nice write. passionate. That's very nice.

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