I loved you with all ur flaws
I loved you and thats against our law
Everything you did is played in ma head like a show
I wish I can beg you not to go
But man what shall I do with my Ego?
Your love made me alive
I feel that I survive
Your smile light up my heart
I wish we will never be apart
Your eyes blew me away
And I stutter, dont know what to say
Your presence makes me breathless
I just want you, no body else
Your looks makes me crazy
And I directly feel dizzy
Your happiness is ma pleasure
Simply you are my treasure
I see your face in the crowd
I love you and Im proud
Nice wordings, nice rhyming and it done in very well shape Batool_Soul
Greta poem Batool, can feel the power in your words.
your happiness is my pleasure, very good. I invite you tom read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You spilled hormonal gush in this poem... Simply good... I like it...