Broken Hearts Call-2 Poem by DiVyA GuptA

Broken Hearts Call-2

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Perhaps, I miss you more everyday..,
But fails even 2 realise and say..!

YOU gavE me such a jerk,
My life became silently dark..! : -(

Still life goes on and on..,
but the memories are not yet burnt..!

Sometimes sad, sometimes anger beholds me..
When i unintentionaly thnk about u...,

Why dis 2 me? why dis 2 me is an unanswered question by me..!

My mind hates you..,
but somewhere my heart recalls YOU..

If 'YOU' werenot like that..,
we would be happy..!
If 'YOU' weren't like that..,
There won't be a Poetry..! ; -(

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 05 June 2013

why wasting tym for someone who doesnt respect your emo. just leave him and give yourself a fresh start

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Krazi Smith 05 June 2013

hey that's a good one! ! ! ! check out. IDGAF poem. really good.... please leave a comment!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 10 June 2013

Some people we meet in life just because God wants us to learn something and after we learnt that valuable lesson we part ways, so don't be sad rather be happy you learned something and carry on with your life, coz maybe that person does not even once think of you, stop wasting your time and just live your life, hope your heart find peace... Great poem again, but please write words not numbers, that makes your poem professional...someone may say that's good, its just how I feel anyway.. Keep writing. Siya_! !

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Kanav Justa 02 November 2013

.. we all have got some memories with us. That we once felt so good recalling them but as things turn out with time.. we no longer want to recall those moments cause they will only make us sad... though we feel that our life seems to be stagnant sometimes... but what is important is that we carry on... these things would always be there... and ironically these are things that makes our life beautiful .. the lessons which they teach us with time.... i can feel. Your emotions cause they have been excellently penned down here...

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If 'YOU' weren't like that.., There won't be a Poetry..! .... I feel the same...you write well..liked it.

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Pratim Bishnu 19 August 2013

good one, i would like u to read my poems as well and comment.

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Dipy Hermonite 19 August 2013

Sad! How can anyone do that to you? Emotion wonderfully portrayed. Lovely write.

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Khairul Ahsan 06 July 2013

If 'YOU' weren't like that.., There won't be a Poetry..! ; -(? Wonderfully said. Poetry is the reflection of feelings deep inside.

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DiVyA GuptA

DiVyA GuptA

Bhadrak, Odisha India
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