Broken: Treatment Poems Collection Poem by Ray Mesa

Broken: Treatment Poems Collection

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Feelings so low
That they barely breathe
I'm so alone
That I barely see
What kept us hand in hand?
What kept us lip to lip
Now, I can barely stand
now the pieces fit
I'm broken without you
But I'm unable to love you
I never hated you
But now I want to kill you
It was always you
Suicide didn’t break me
and neither will you
God don't take me
until these sidewalk is new

Monday, May 8, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Ray, i love your poem! it reminds me of me and my past loves! except im a gurl! well if you get a chance, check out my poems! love always Pete Wentz' Babe (my real name is Star)

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