Ray Mesa

Rookie (5/17/89 / Grand Forks)

Broken: Treatment Poems Collection - Poem by Ray Mesa

Feelings so low
That they barely breathe
I'm so alone
That I barely see
What kept us hand in hand?
What kept us lip to lip
Now, I can barely stand
now the pieces fit
I'm broken without you
But I'm unable to love you
I never hated you
But now I want to kill you
It was always you
Suicide didn’t break me
and neither will you
God don't take me
until these sidewalk is new

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  • (10/6/2006 11:19:00 PM)


    Ray,
    i love your poem! it reminds me of me and my past loves! except im a gurl! well if you get a chance, check out my poems!
    love always
    Pete Wentz' Babe
    (my real name is Star)
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 8, 2006



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