Paul Sebastian


Broken Wings - Poem by Paul Sebastian

You break my wings
So that I cannot fly
My heart had dreams
But now they will die

A promise, now broken
Can a knot mend it?
Trust once is forsaken
Can love again knit?

Better I let you be
Let you go your way
Better I set you free
My life bare, I’ll stay

17.11.2015

Topic(s) of this poem: freedom, separation


Comments about Broken Wings by Paul Sebastian

  • Farah Anasmosa (12/19/2015 10:30:00 AM)


    You break my wings
    So that I cannot fly
    My heart had dreams
    But now they will die

    A heart touching poem as I can sense the sadness. Thanks for sharing.10
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/25/2015 10:41:00 AM)


    Sad drop. Has a beautiful rhyming and flow. Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2015 3:30:00 AM)


    The poem bearing a sense of distress is most touching. The emotions expressed are tormenting and finally the bowing before the unavoidable.10 +++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015



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