Brother Or Father..? ? ? Poem by Fatima Obaid

Brother Or Father..? ? ?



Coolness of my heart
Calmness of my eyes
Flow of my words
Drive of my life
in the wrap of his love
is the fragness of safety
he makes me laugh harder
laugh so harder so louder
he gives me wealth of care
he catches my mystery in a stare
live long bro! for you i pray
live long bro! for you i pray
losing you is a loss unable to bear
Yo always makes my way so clear
you can never see in my eye a tear
you are my hero! my only dear
brother is not like father
brother is himself a 'father
my mentor my brother
my love my brother

Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,father
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 June 2016

you make your point! you love your brother. if i had more time i would make some English suggestions, but i'm just too busy now. thanks for sharing. i like your bio, but one 'correction' there would be: change breathe to breath. i used to get those two words mixed up. bri :)

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Painfully beautiful poem Fatima.Pain is a first step to pleasure. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Woru Sulyman 01 June 2016

loss is harder when it's the loss of a loved one

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