C.J. Heck

Rookie - 255 Points (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

Bumble Bee (Preschool) - Poem by C.J. Heck

Today I saw a bumblebee.
He was on a pretty rose.
I leaned in to look at him
and he stung me on my nose!

I wasn’t gonna squish him,
only watch and see …
but I’ll never get THAT close again
to a grouchy grumble-bee.

Comments about Bumble Bee (Preschool) by C.J. Heck

  • (1/7/2006 5:47:00 PM)

    So sweet and innocent. A 10 from me, C.J.

    (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (1/7/2006 12:15:00 PM)

    And one can literally see the child and the bee because you relate so well our memories as a child (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2006 10:23:00 AM)

    This is brilliant CJ had me laughing out loud. I have two stories about Bees from my childhood, one concerning my sister the other my dog. Must realte them to you sometime. Sill laffin' (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2006 10:17:00 AM)

    This brought a big wide grin to my face! Thanks CJ, Moyaxx (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2006 9:36:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful poem, wonderfully written.
    Your talent for children's poetry, never
    ceases to amaze me.
    I enjoy reading you so much.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Kindest Regards Slim. x.
    (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »
User Rating:
4,7 / 5 ( 38 votes ) 5

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 7, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 5, 2006

Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]