David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Bungle - Poem by David Darbyshire

I really do wonder
about that blunder
it really did come true
that horrible Boo-Boo

It still is a blur
that funny err
I tried to stay cool
but looked like a fool

it does not reckon
I wasn't drunk or stoned
only seemed a second
I was on my own

I am not going
to tell you about my blunder
I'm going to let, you all Wonder
One hint, I was dressed as Boy Wonder


Comments about Bungle by David Darbyshire

  • (4/21/2006 8:38:00 AM)


    THIS is too funny...... glad I stopped sipping my coffee before the last line! Tickly rhymes (love blur and err, I don't care!) ...... If nothing else, Dave (last line) , YOU ARE ONE FUN GUY! ! ! ! ! ! Cheers, Esther : ] (Report) Reply

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  • (4/21/2006 6:52:00 AM)


    Boy wonder in blue tights and a cape with a mask? You really need to stay out of those shops in the red district! lol...lol..

    Love
    Patricia
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  • (4/21/2006 6:34:00 AM)


    Dissapointed, David. I was hoping for George and Zippy.lol
    Danny
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 21, 2006



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