Burden Poem by Cory Jensen
Burden
Don't blame yourself for my mistake
For I took this on for both of us.
It was your burden to bear,
I couldnt stand the pain of you breaking down.
I took your burden as my own.
The hurt, and all the confusion,
The tears you never can cry.
I took them as my own,
To know what you feel inside.
You say your heartless,
That no love pumps your chest.
That goes to show you can't see what I do.
I see you radiating with love,
Love that is timeless.
Love that is endless.
A love that is mine and yours alone.
I took this burden on for the both of us,
To show that you do have love
In the hollowness of your heart.
Take a single glance upon our hands
Breathe in deep and long
Tell me is that our song?
From our hearts that sing
That beautiful melody
Of love.
Take one look at us.
I know that we have won.
very good rhymes but if you could rewrite it with like words that mean the same thing but like are bigger lol it always helped my poems to come out a little but then again it might just be perfect the way is so ya keep it up
well written poem to dedicated the real love, thanks for sharing,
i enjoyed reading it as well, i also understand it, the mountain on one is the wind on another
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:01:39 AM # 1.0.0.1119
It's hard to bear another's cross, especially when we have our own to bear. I could feel the solidarity, the willingness to let go of you to have two. - But it's a double-edged sword, isn't it. Was it really a mistake? Or perhaps a lesson learned. Some just don't have it to give, which is certainly not your case. Powerful, Cory, and very painful. Great write, though! :)