Burning Outside Poem by sekharan pookkat

Burning Outside



Sun is burning outside
Mind is blushing inside
How you are in the morning
Feeling light as feather!
or harder as stunning rock?
Leaves are lingering
Flowers are leaning beneath
And I am melting
As cold as ice.

Monday, April 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ground is dry and wounded
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 10 April 2016

Burining outside, melting as ice, true feel, is overt, thanks for the share

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Ging Taping 08 April 2016

ground is dry and wounded like a brokenhearted.. :)

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