Loneliness
Dreadful loneliness
Uprights mind
Painfully indeed.
Loneliness
Threaded loneliness
Threats mind
And throbs heart.
Loneliness
Dreadful loneliness
Changes mind
With peaceful thoughts.
Loneliness
Painful thoughts
Throbbing heart
Exhilarated into poem.
The sad tune of loneliness, the sense of loss and longing have touched my heart.10+
A beautiful write that expresses with great insight into the state of mind that is loneliness!
some times it is a gift otherwise.............thank you very much for your comments
Loneliness Dreadful loneliness Changes mind With peaceful thoughts. great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++
It's in our loneliest times that our mind is filled with thoughts, these thoughts then become words on a page. Wonderful poem Sekharan.
Well said, loneliness resulting in a poem, and then it is no more loneliness, but solitude that seems a must for penning poems. When one is alone and still do not feel lonely.
Loneliness is beautiful in a way...fine write...well penned.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice expression, nice writing, nice thought.
thanks for your encouraging comment on my poem