Busy Town Comments

I picture robots walking around in lines here.....lives in automation....with blank stares

A cold and rude awkening to the city life, the dark side of its moon, skillfully penned David One line so easily flowing into the next, NOW THAT'S TALLENT MY FRIEND! ! ! Love duncan X

Reminds me of Southern English town, the one I searched up and down looking for some advice. No luck I am afraid, please try again another time. Well written I caught the mood. Bob

Surburbia neatly caught... atmospheric, varied. A fine portrayal, with its subtle message. t x

Conjures up the diversity and anonymity of the modern city - where some emotional needs are over satisfied and some are starved. Richly evocative, with noise, smell, sight, movement all strongly catered for. Genuinely highly quality writing David. Loved this. jim

Great ending, David... and it's almost like people are too busy to care. Good stuff! Brian

I could see the place, in my mind has i read along...David 10 again...