But Alas, Here I Take My Last Breath Poem by Elena Plotkin

But Alas, Here I Take My Last Breath

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But alas, here I take my last breath.
Forgive me for not getting up, Mr. Death.
I wish I was a better host,
than you are a guest.

But alas, here I take my last breath.
No use in counting up my wealth.
There's not enough to go around,
or so I have often found.

But alas, here I take my last breath.
I have no one to blame but myself.
I've tried to spend my wretched days,
in the most respectable of ways.

But alas, here I take my last breath.
Please be kind to me, Mr. Death.
I did a lot of good in my life, I suppose.
I regret all the bad I've done, God knows.

But alas, here I take my last breath.
No more time to wallow in myself.
I must prepare to meet my Maker,
the Supreme Life-giver and Life-taker.

But alas, here I take my last breath...

(c) 2013 Copyright Elena Plotkin

Thursday, September 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: Death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 09 October 2015

Very thought provoking poem. meeting with Mr. death somehow it gives me a lot of fear. But for someone who has faith, death is only a passing away to the nether world and it is not a permanent state. losing the body and all that we have built up here to meet with the Maker as you write should be a joyous all welcoming matter. thank you for this thought provoking poem tony

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Kavya . 14 November 2013

a v nice poem with a superb flow of lines!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013

Greatly enjoyed the comments of Bri Edwards. I concur with his request with regard to your taking the 'last breath'.

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Bri Edwards 14 September 2013

elena, for some reason (i KNOW why) my brain registered the last word of the following stanza as ghost instead of guest. then i noticed my mistake. i haven't even read further and i'm making a comment already! But alas, here I take my last breath. Forgive me for not getting up, Mr. Death. I wish I was a better host, than you are a guest. you've taken your LAST BREATH? ? PLEASE! SAY IT ISN'T SO! WRITE MORE FIRST. PLEASE. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 14 September 2013

But alas, here I take my last breath. No more time to wallow in myself. I must prepare to meet my Maker, the Supreme Life-giver and Life-taker.' Only a firm believer can say like this. Very impressive!

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