Wednesday, June 19, 2019

But He Was Not Him Comments

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Place in the sun, puff of chair,
World-at-my-feet air,
But to face ‘him' was not fair.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2019

A brilliant haiku is wisely executed. So interesting with lofty theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani M, you're kind with good words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2019

Flair, affair! Fair; He did get his dream. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 June 2019

Thank you Edward Louis. At times, interpreting your bullet-point comments is harder than writing the poem. But you are a master class at that.

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Jane Campion 19 June 2019

A poem that appears more than at at face value.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 June 2019

Thanks for the feedback, but is not it true for all poems? A poem is or at least should be like an iceberg. The visible part, the written words, account for only one-third of its meaning.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2019

A wonderful poem sir with scintillating rhythm and rhyme! However, I could not make out what is that 'de la crème' (though I inferred it) ! An excellent work.....................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 June 2019

Thank you Dr Swain for appreciating the poem. As to your query it is the French expression borrowed into English and means 'cream of cream'.

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