But I Never Cried Poem by Chitresh Jhawar

wah! wat a poem..... but ab mujhe tumhari har poem ke end ki adat ho gyi hai death....! ! ! but i luv this.... ;)

bt u have to cry to feel better...

This is indeed, a heart clinging poem. One that makes the reader feel empathy for the persona. The external rhyme creates a sense of Lyrical Poetry (Song): but, I can see that this poem can be a lot more poetic if you cut some of the words out and simplified your lines. Not sure if you are going for Lyrical Poetry or a Free Verse here. So, unfortunately, I cannot give much criticism on this poem.

wow! really a heart touching poem! a 10 on 10

Very Nicely written. (:

so young, yet so sad keep writing to make sense of it all sg

I enjoy the way you use your words. Most of this poem was great, but it could be better. I can relate which is good and i like how you say it how it is. Life isn't always rainbows and butterflies, because 'then life would be death and our breath would be song, we'd have no need to live, for there'd be nothing wrong.' I would suggest more editting, and the use of written words, you have more to write on than a phone don't you?

Good one liked it very much stood brave and at last had to give up, pain, hurt anger, and disappointment all well said with great feelings...Thanks for sharing...

Nice one. You certainly have done a great job expressing pain, anger, disappointment, and hurt so well with your wonderful words.

This is a beautiful poem showing strength at first, and at the end you really see the weakness. I can feel myself in this poem. Very good. I love it.