Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 111,865 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

But The Rose Flower Left Me Alone - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Oh cute! Deaf and dumb! Why are you mute?
Where is your music? Don’t have a flute?
Any other instrument, will you please play?
From beauty like you, don’t like a nay.
Colors spread like a sudden rainbow,
Such a green hit and the sexy pink throw!
She smiled and slowly started speaking,
secret of a virgin now peeping and leaking,
her aroma whispered in the restless heart.
“Imprisoned I was in thorns and thwart,
Thanks my poet you got out me free,
Behind the branches of dying old tree,
I see a colorful flying butterfly,
You are on earth and I want to fly,
I want to see the blue sky,
A lovely companion is the rainbow fly.
Good Bye Dear Poet! With love good bye,
My aroma to inspire, my color to dye,
Shall remain with you for you only you,
For a blocked mind, isn’t it a break through? ”
I am enchanted with my bud’s lovely sweet tone,
but the rose flower has left me alone!

Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration


Comments about But The Rose Flower Left Me Alone by Akhtar Jawad

  • Rajnish Manga (11/4/2016 3:33:00 AM)


    An amazing poem unfolding various beautiful shades of nature in which things around us appear to be in love with each other. Thanks, Akhtar jawad Sahab. I quote:
    I see a colorful flying butterfly / You are on earth and I want to fly,
    I want to see the blue sky /... but the rose flower has left me alone!
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  • Valsa George (9/4/2015 12:32:00 AM)


    This sounds so very beautiful Akhtarji! It has carried me to some magic isle on the view less wings of imagination, though I don't fully understand what you speak of! A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/2/2015 11:40:00 AM)


    The romantic poet has penned another rose of a poem! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/2/2015 9:08:00 AM)


    Fantastic depiction. Amusing and interesting. Fasvourite lines.......I am enchanted with my bud’s lovely sweet tone,
    but the rose flower has left me alone! . thanks for sharing. .....10
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  • (9/2/2015 7:14:00 AM)


    A beautiful imagery but I see it symbolic...............................10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 2, 2015


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