But She Was Touched Poem by Akhtar Jawad

But She Was Touched

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I arose early in the morning, a routine every day,
Washed may hands, brushed my teeth, washed my face,
Cleaned my hair, washed my foot, tried to have a little of the grace,
Proceeded towards light, with a mortal clay.

When I was moving outside I saw her on the top of a building,
Her beautiful blue house, and I noticed her fair complexion,
I smiled at her, but couldn't notice my smile's reaction,
I bowed my head and while coming back, saw her again still standing.

Now her face was clear and distinctly sighted,
An amazing beauty, a pinkish doll, in a white bridal dress,
I wished her hand in my hand, with love I could press,
She looked into eyes, gave her hand, in my hand excited.

I wonder how her hand was so much stretched,
What did she see in my thirsty eyes,
You may take it as a truth or one of my lies,
She was so far, but she was touched.

(A love affair with Miss Early Morning)

Sunday, May 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The nature is really beautiful in the early mornings.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 22 December 2016

A beautiful poem............................................................

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Rajnish Manga 04 November 2016

Everybody follows somewhat the same routine in the morning but you need to have the eyes of a sensitive poet to fall in love with a charming morning. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 20 June 2015

So original and imaginative with inspired lines that touch the beauty of nature in it's morning glory! Stunning write!

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Matthias Pantaleon 14 May 2014

Full of metaphor. A very enjoyable read. Every line is a beautiful beyond words

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Ramesh Rai 13 May 2014

Beautiful write sir.love your ink

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