Butter Poem by rachael richmond

Butter

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i am butter in your hands

you only have to touch me
and i melt

your hands glide, slide
but inside i don't want this
i am swimming against the tide

i need cool
not you
such a fool am i

i hate being butter in your hands
i hate you
for the power you have over me

i hate you
i love you
i need you
but i don't want you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Magill 23 May 2009

great writing...... its not the power, its the rest of the world being inconvient.everyone loves being melted.

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Sandra Fowler 22 July 2007

A very genuine, heartfelt write. You are not afraid to give yourself away in words. Fine work, rachael. Warm regards, Sandra

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