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when its lonesome
its alone
perhaps
i live in a cage
it was forced on me
by and by
it grew on me
i liked it
or not
encased
secure
but
caged
one day i chanced
upon life
metamorphosed
my cage
my case
in a shackle
no more my
anchor
i try
i cry
i moan
to breakfree
alone me
from lonliness.....................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Thomas 27 October 2008

Like this a lot, Trinity - reminds me of my own 'Butterfly child', but yours captures the fluttreing fragility far better. Keep it up!

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Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2008

a butterfly in a cage...a case of secured loneliness...an effective write on the selected theme...well done, Trinity 10

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Catherine Rica Cosico 02 June 2008

Full of pain and anguish...great write! ! !

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Hana K 01 June 2008

so good so saaddd sooo...unbelievable beautiful

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Sadiqullah Khan 24 April 2008

nice poem......well written

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