Butterfly Poem by Saint Cynosure

Butterfly

Rating: 4.7


You're pathetically ugly,
thats what they all say.
As they frolic together,
in the summer and play.
And I'm all alone,
all by myself.
Here in my tree,
with nobody else.
But the jokes on them,
and soon they will see.
All of this beauty,
that lives inside me.
For my time will come,
and some day real soon.
When I step outside,
of my self woven room.
In my beautiful colors,
so pleasing to eyes.
Kaleidoscopical beauty alive in the sky...K

Wednesday, July 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Transformationof the soul -how heavenly.

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Janice Etienne 11 September 2008

i don't know.. but i love darkness with a small circle of light at the end and in your darkness it's an ending of blooming nature with the sun at the end but one day you'll touch the light but your still far in the dark it's amazing

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

A melodious composition. Nice.

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Silence Dogood 27 August 2008

This is really good the ryhmes are nice and i like it

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 August 2008

yes I liked it....10

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Bri Edwards 22 January 2019

i like that you apparently took suggestions from Adeline in editing. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 22 January 2019

is adding..K, at the end, just your 'signature'? is it meant to be part of the poem? i'd like a stanza break between these two lines, ...but... i don't get my way always, and it's your poem, AND a good one! with nobody else. But the jokes on them, to MyPoemList. and i plan to use in my February 2019 showcase of poems, soon to be found in my list of PH poems, with topics this month of lonely and butterfly. Thanks. bri (:

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Elisabeth Wingle 30 November 2015

wonderful, you make it look so easy. thanks for sharing

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Maria Justa Polotan 23 September 2015

Beauty deep within and the courage to unwrap the layers that hide it. Thank you for posting this.

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Adeline Foster 03 October 2011

This is a good poem that has much more going for it than just cute. I really liked that last line. May I show you two changes that would help? The first word of the first line should read 'You're' because you really mean 'you are'; also, you may have meant the third line to read, 'As they frolic'. Great poem. Adeline

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