Monday, December 30, 2019

Butterfly And Its Belief Comments

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I hope to enjoy morning sun
Whilst drinking drops of fresh dew
Balancing snugly upon you,
Worry not, I won't be much burden
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2019

Burdens of life! ! Not to worry too much; Free like the butterfly. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 December 2019

Yes, butterfly is the fittest symbol of freedom. Thanks for visiting.

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Kostas Lagos 30 December 2019

Perfect! Title, words, meaning.All perfect!

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 December 2019

Thanks for generous comments, but we humans can be on the way to excellence, a non-ending journey to perfection...rare if ever reaching the destination.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 December 2019

A sweet poem sir! Loved reading it......Full marks

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 December 2019

Sweet little feedback on the eve of New Year, thanks Dr Swain

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