By Design! Poem by Geoff Warden

By Design!

Rating: 4.5


By design of deepened Love
thou has been placed within my heart
tho not a perfected sanctuary
a place to find new start

By design of higher order
for within my hands no control
through fragile times contained
together we shall willingly stroll

By design of human nature
a Goliath has stepped forth
the ugly nature of its own
has turned a spirit course

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 05 September 2006

That is ok. Goliath was brought down by one small stone put into play through a shepard boy who followed the good shepard. Nice write and well crafted. I love the title and the thought behind it. P.S. Thanks for your encouragement.

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Duncan Wyllie 26 August 2006

Glad to see your works again Geoff, I hope all is fine with you, Love duncan X

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Jessy Liz 24 August 2006

Add a 9; well done. I love your wording.

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Geoff Warden

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London Ontario Canada
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