As you come to the folds of night
the moment goes hurriedly as the wind
by the tunes of the night yet fading
rose when smooching to the smiles
no room for fray as you feel me within
would you not whisper me the blue
as your glaze wake s me up again
from light of the day to the we hours
await may smudge the waves of love
as you dazzle with your eyes in grin
love when besotted redeems true
night in its dark deep rambles blue
by the glory of love when you shine
sea when thunders as in resurgence
by the gleams of love when glimmered
yet it raffles through the mist of whisper
to burn me in the room of its secrets of fire
Dr, this is truely so beautiful and its flowing just perfection and very intensive..just very well penned.
extremely beautiful penning....the word the flow is superb...tnx 4 sharing wishes anjali
To burn me in the room in the secrets of fire...I love this last line, Dr. There are plenty of meanings here, yet, only you can express it best..Your writings are deep, so intense, on fire..and the flow are just so lovely..you are born to be a romantic one and lovable..
beautiful and very romantic, write Dr. thank you for sharing. Patrice
very beautiful Dr. Its very touchable and romantic....thank you for sharing...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice romantic poem Dr. Kar! A joy to read thank you! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad