(c) 13 (Life/Philosophy) A Mind Rich In Innocence Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(c) 13 (Life/Philosophy) A Mind Rich In Innocence

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Truth, The Real God
Not that we have made
Does not want a facade
Of the limited and narrow world that we parade

It asks for a mind rich in Innocence
That doesnt have a scratch of experience
A mind free from time
A mind free from grime

It wants a Being whose heart is Full
Rich, clear which does not get pulled
By jaded and petty eyesight
Just capable of intense feeling in all its might

Be sensitive with your nerves
Your eyes, your body, your voice, your ears
See the beauty of the tree, the smile of the child
The agony of the woman without a meal, the animals in wild

Unless you do, there is no intelligence
It doesnt come with knowledge or experience
Comes with sensitivity and observation
A mind rich in Innocence....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 17 December 2006

Very nice.... One of those poems which cannot be responded to! Marvellous!

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Patricia Gale 15 December 2006

Beautiful T.O., you are one who displays this type of mind, Innocence, beauty and love for man kind.Well done!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 December 2006

Yes, T.O....The ask... from the Eye of God...Peace, Innocence, and HE has given us Free Will & Wisdom from HIS Word, to accomplish these virtues, in our livee...A very spiritually skilled work, my dear...A fine Penning, indeed... fjr

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Geoff Warden 14 December 2006

T.O. What does one say to this except write on......your truth caught up in such shorten verse is above all........so profound and stated in the richness of thy mind there just is not enough tens for you on this one..................

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