Call Of Commitment Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Call Of Commitment



What if tonight turned the last living night?
Paint in thy heart O man where soul is felt
The portrait of the sacrifices dealt
By thine sires and ancient seers of rare height,
And ponder on the frown upon their face,
Ponder on their displeasure showing clear
On their unhappy hurtful a grimace,
Think if ye lived up to deeds to them dear.

If no—I guess that's what thine heart so feels,
Thousand pities that all thy oblations,
All pompous pretensions and wilted wills
Would fail; go learn anew long lost lessons.
False pledges from vainest of head depart,
Call of commitment comes from holy heart.
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For long years Hindus have traced their family lineage called gotra to one or the other of ancient seers and sages. On many occasions they are invoked mechanically and worshipped. But do we live up to their expectations? It has been reduced to mere rituals of this evocative heritage.
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Sonnets | 11.11.08 |

Saturday, December 21, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: culture,heritage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2019

Call of Commitment! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 August 2019

Thanks for reading this old piece of 2008, liking it.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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