indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Call Of Desire* - Poem by indira babbellapati

this embryonic desire
to surrender myself
at the altar of your passion
to feel the warmth of your breath
that breathes the skin
into a glow
to taste those lips
that determine the course
of our growing passions
set to flood either of us
dislodge me out of this
empty human reason
and put me on a flight
of fancy
no longer can i
resist this call of desire...

*on reading Thomas Horton's 'Gomorrah'a while ago


Comments about Call Of Desire* by indira babbellapati

  • (9/19/2009 5:35:00 PM)

    oooh, this is more than i have to read what inspired you! (Report) Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (9/19/2009 1:54:00 PM)

    beautiful and very well written

    is it just Gomorrah
    soddom and gomarrah
    remeber doing the second one decades back

    superb inspired poetry...indeed well done books add to the flavour and can be so inspiring to give us such masterpieces..
    cheers and ten
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/16/2009 1:18:00 PM)

    greatly penned! loved it! !
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  • (9/9/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    An excellent piece, very well penned. (Report) Reply

  • (9/9/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    The inspiration and the poet vie for supremacy.........and i vote the poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Beautiful, thanks madam!
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  • (9/9/2009 2:57:00 AM)

    desire can be deadly.... but can be..... satisfying... like this. (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (9/9/2009 1:21:00 AM)

    Great, Indira.10............ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 27, 2009

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