Can We Still Be Friends? Poem by Brie Carter

Can We Still Be Friends?



I was cold and hurting
lost out in the night
wandering and searching
for heaven's light

I saw the night sky clearing
when you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
what joy you would bring

From that moment on
a friendship did start
you kissed away my tears
and sheltered my heart

I bless the day God
sent him from above
But then I grew fearful
for I had fallen in love

I told you this feeling
and what did you say?
You said you liked our friendship
and that's how it would stay

I cried for a friendship I thought I lost
But then felt your warm, gentle hand
You then whispered in my ear
that by my side you'll forever stand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Zaratzian 19 November 2008

i had this once i messed it up bad now i regret it

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Iron Panda 23™ 21 April 2010

this is soo beautiful....touching....its soo...idk but i likes it ALOT! ! !

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wow i love this one itss soo touching...

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Carol Gall 15 May 2009

beautiful poem love rainbow wings sometimes a friend is all that it will be but maybe you have a friend for life

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Davina olsen 25 March 2009

your poem is bueatiful... i really like it i feel the same way...

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<font color =fusha>Amy 04 December 2008

great poem i know exactly how that feels but at least for you, he will always be there for you great write

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