Brie Carter

Rookie - 0 Points (March 12,1994 / Dalton)

Beautiful Disaster - Poem by Brie Carter

She cuts her wrists so beautifully,
Right to the bone,
She does this each and every night,
When she's all alone.
No one understands her,
Not even her friends,
She has no one to talk to,
She wants it all to just end.

Her pain hides behind the smiles,
And the dark make up she wears
She feels life has no point,
And that no one cares,

She goes to sleep each night,
Praying, that tomorrow all the pain and sorrow will be gone,
Tears stream down her face,
She tries so hard to be strong

Then this one fatal night,
They find her hanging from a tree,
I think shes happy now,
because she has finally been set free from all her pain and misery.

Comments about Beautiful Disaster by Brie Carter

  • (3/18/2010 7:58:00 AM)

    i LOVED it! ! !
    this was a 'beautiful disaster'! ! !
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  • (7/27/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    hey you know! ! ! ! there is a similar song by the name Beautiful disaster by Kelly Clarkson, ..
    I love her....
    this one is all cool! ! tooo... liked this one...this is very moving.. nice emotions here friend...

    with lv
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  • (2/27/2009 1:26:00 PM)

    Wonderful Poem. This one is my favorite of all time (Report) Reply

  • (2/20/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    wow this is deep i can really understand i've been down that road before nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    God, i love this...
    brings back a lot though, on those who have been through this pain, and sorrow. thinking one may not have anyone who cares for them. but when you look around, there is ALWAYS someone by your side.
    great job! =)
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  • (12/15/2008 1:37:00 AM)

    very well penned! (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2008 11:20:00 AM)

    a beautifuly sad poem. (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2008 12:49:00 PM)

    its really good just at the end i think you should take out from all her pain and misery
    you have talent
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  • (11/2/2008 5:40:00 PM)

    forgot to put it in my last comment, but anyone who reads it check out my recent poem Beautiful Disaster if u search it, it should come up under Caitlyn plz comment (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    wow i love it, the title got my attention because me and my friend were thinking about writing a poem titled beautiful disaster so we both wrote our own version, hers went kind of like yours. Is this about you or someone u know? and as far as Sathyanarayana, thats what all adults think, if they don't get it, they never will. (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (10/8/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    Very very sad story......really very it true? I am worried about the teenage children's peculiar problems; why they commit suicide? You have done well in bringing this kind of sad incident to light......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 24, 2010

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