David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Canada (Haiku) - Poem by David Darbyshire

Big beautiful land,
maple surup and pancakes,
Beaver, Moose and Deer

Comments about Canada (Haiku) by David Darbyshire

  • (1/31/2007 5:38:00 PM)

    Very great, especially since I'll be moving to Canada. You forgot to talk about the \ people and hockey. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/7/2006 2:14:00 AM)

    You can keep the maple syrup and pancakes, Dave, but bring me back a moose, OK?

    Love, Fran the fan xx
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  • (11/1/2006 8:10:00 AM)

    Like your haiku Dave, maple syrup, mmm......and it has to be the real stuff. Deer is almost a dirty word in this locale, they're beautiful to watch but planting a garden is basically just food for the deer. A fun experiment to find the plants the deer won't eat.......................All the best, Diane (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2006 6:27:00 AM)

    interesting haiku...

    a few words say it all...

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, November 1, 2010

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