Canada (Haiku) Poem by David Darbyshire

Canada (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Big beautiful land,
maple surup and pancakes,
Beaver, Moose and Deer

Wednesday, November 1, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vega Star 31 January 2007

Very great, especially since I'll be moving to Canada. You forgot to talk about the \ people and hockey.

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Francesca Johnson 07 November 2006

You can keep the maple syrup and pancakes, Dave, but bring me back a moose, OK? Love, Fran the fan xx

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Diane Violet 01 November 2006

Like your haiku Dave, maple syrup, mmm......and it has to be the real stuff. Deer is almost a dirty word in this locale, they're beautiful to watch but planting a garden is basically just food for the deer. A fun experiment to find the plants the deer won't eat.......................All the best, Diane

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Asma Bahrainwala 01 November 2006

interesting haiku... a few words say it all... Asma...

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