Candle Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Candle

Rating: 5.0


...................I am the candle...........................
................Burned near the grave........................
..............This is not what I wanted......................
.............Where nobody is around to see...................
..............Me melting second by second....................
..............And shortening inch by inch....................
..............My life is going to the waste....................
...............Just because you think........................
...............You care for the grave.......................

Wednesday, December 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dark
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 07 December 2016

Captivating and imaginative, Asimji you write meaningful poems.

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Mihaela Pirjol 07 December 2016

A conceptual creative writing, lovely to envision.

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Nosheen Irfan 07 December 2016

A beautiful allegorical write. Profound verses. A life of sacrifice is not an easy one. A super 10.

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