john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 4,540 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Candles - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

candle
it is used to light up
your years

candle
it is used to blow out
your years

candle
it is used to turn shadows
into animals

candle
it is used to help us see
the real from the shadows

candle
love and passion drip
through the wedding night

candle
a lump of spent energy
after all is over


Comments about Candles by john tiong chunghoo

  • (4/13/2008 10:36:00 AM)


    This is a nice one, John...why not expand it a little?

    Raynette
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, April 14, 2008


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