Candy 'N I Poem by Eman obied

Candy 'N I

Rating: 4.5


As I walked coyly into a thrilling candy shop
Brimming with children so amazed
that their eyes would fully pop
i carefully observe chocolates
while reaching out for a lollypop
I sink into what I call
A late childhood of mine
As excitement washes me
n' drifts me I fail to look behind
Nevertheless, I do look behind
I send my glimpes around
I decide that vision and taste
are now to bound
I reach for a an enchanting destant bar
My height isn't supporting
Yet, I get the aptitude
I clutch it.it isn't too far
Shall I just unwrap it here and now
Or wait in the queue,
with an anxiously Raised brow
No, I fail to endure
I need my candy
If only I had patiece
It would have been handy
Candy oh
Candy oh
Oh candy
Too sweet
Too sugary
Too addictive!

Friday, May 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: candy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
isam Abdelrahman 30 August 2012

Real and honest self-saying, a jumping-over poetic clogging poem.Greetings

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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

nice and very very sweet, thank you for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 18 May 2012

very nice and cenductive..... :) nostalgic and charming nice write :)

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Hans Vr 12 May 2012

Nicely written. I am of to the kitchen. I need some candy urgently :)

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Joseph Anderson 04 May 2012

There's nothing wrong with having a sweet tooth.I enjoyed this light-hearted expose. Keep writing and enjoy that candy

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