Eman obied

Rookie (24-10-1992 / khartoum)

Sudan Revolts - Poem by Eman obied

I may not be the most petriotic citizin
nor the the most suffering


I may not be the one who's homesick
nor the one who's been forcefully migrated
nor by choice..


I may not be one of those
who conterbuted by act nor by voice..


but I feel those who suffer
those who suffocate.
those who've called



called for freedom!



Freedom of what? ?
freedom of crime?
rape? and hate?



freedom of silencing those who speak
speak of what?
speak the truth and
the future of youth?



power creates change
power? ?

power to whom?
power to the one's who's
made us separate?
homeless? and hungry




created thieves of hard worker men?
lashed and silenced women
for their shame
they say n claim!



on the verge
of falling as a nation
you ask to seek an explanation?




of the behavour of those you've called roits!

vilonce seems the only weapon used upon us
although all weapons run out of bullets.


so hold on weakly to you're emptied guns
we've lost enough daughters
and have lost enough sons


Rise Sudan Rise!


Comments about Sudan Revolts by Eman obied

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/16/2012 6:33:00 AM)


    A thoughtful write.The only country solely responsible for this is USA who are a bunch of immigrant europeans in another peoples land stolen with mass murder.They do not attack any european country or sell arms when one EU state are willing to contest another.They have problems when Asia and Africa rise.Racist ideologies they nurture in their churches and whites are people who will never get along with Sudanese because of colour and culture which they think a discriminating factors.The world must unite against US and EU.Their cheap allies the one India must realise US can never help economic growth in any country unless their own.Complete annihilation of US-world enemy and EU whites or their dummies of other colours bribed or raised up in EU with pervert ideologies in the only solution.Sudan is a oil target of US too.They must work hand in hand with the sufferings of other countries because of US. (Report) Reply

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  • Eindaray Kyaw (9/14/2012 12:43:00 PM)


    so strong verses and your sharp mind fills the degree of your poem..
    I can see the meaning easily not because I am clever..but because
    your writing skill is so clear and marvelous! !
    Well Done!
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  • (8/7/2012 3:18:00 PM)


    Eman-I hope you are okay You said it well.All the turmoil in the world just makes me sick-so
    terrible
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 6, 2012



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