Cannibal Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver

Cannibal

Rating: 4.3


We found each other, hungry,
thirsty, and singed by love.
I'm charred by love again, then
you left this rapacious lioness
I commence to rage,
strangling on anger,
losing my way.
now I lay a weaken prey.
Rush upon me, you
hungry lion!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eddie Roa 23 January 2009

Must have been a torrid and passionate love. nice write

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 August 2009

Ohhh gosh.. you have used great imagery indeed.. I mean this is very different.. I mean I have been reading lots of different poems lately.. First the title interested me.. poem good, very nice to read.. I like your expressions//... very creative.and imaginative.. love shan

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A passionate write. Loved the story line of the poem! So enjoyed; D

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 29 June 2010

u are a great writer and i love how u keep em simple and short...my writes are too long for some people...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 March 2010

Exotic [Strikingly strange or unusual] exuberance love…downed by absence… so to come closer…wants to be prey even…. Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 November 2009

a creative poem, touching, thanks for sharing 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

Out of love and alone, I can’t find a way. I’m a weaken prey. So rush upon me, you hungry lion! ....speaks helpless state of mind ondesertionand it is unbearable pain.....lovley theme....10 read mine pain....you go alone

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