Cloud and gloom hang low
Sunshine nowhere in sight
Herein lies autumn mood
Fallen leaves make beds on the floor
holding onto the leaves that's left
and thanks to these old dry limbs
Color despair and sadness
with a coat of hope:
'Winter an etching
Spring a watercolor
Summer an oil painting
And autumn a mosaic of all'
What a luminous work of art
I'm falling in love with Fall!
a beautiful poetry on the seasons...barren tree like my arms..autmn an oil painting...lovely imagery...10
Beautifull poem! ! the first stanza was my favourite.! ! I miss reading your poetry, i was very sad today and this made me feel better! : D
you are a great literary artist in poetry! This one is great!
What luminous work of poetry! Nice work Almedia...provides sweet soothing read...10
hey ALM... some lines are so potent...almost palpable... Trees stand bare with limbs- Just as empty as my arms Color the sadness With a coat of autumn: most likedd these... a great snap of natures moods...and how it effects those in its old...well done..ma'am cheers and ten
Loved thispoem. Evolving from one season to another. Vivid in imagination.
Beautifully written. I was pulled right into the poem and saw all the glorious colors you painted with your words. I enjoyed my autumn walk. thanks my friend. Lynn
Autumn touches ‘…Autumn a mosaic of them all…’ and the mosaic with all its valor in ‘Lows’ and makes ‘Low’ great Melancholy has a mellowed soothing beauty and its reflected poetically in terms of season…thanks Ma’am Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poetry crafted with the seasons of the year...well done!