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Saturday, August 26, 2006

Cant Edit Love

Rating: 4.5
Its in your heart.
Not like a beer fart.
It stays with you.
Just like a solid glue.
Wont ever fail or fall.
Always there at the call.
Never a moment of rest.
Your love is my heart crest.
Cant sell it or loose it.
It is in my heart of life.
The one you love as a wife.
Not like a rotten old fish tail.
KEEP- give me more ALE.
That will fill my lost sail.
May I creep into another Dream flight.
There you are in my sight.
Your love I can never EDIT.
I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT.
JOE POEWHIT
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COMMENTS
Piere De Saily 09 June 2010
inspiring hope you dont mind if i send it to fadzie! good job man.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009
‘…Your love I can never EDIT. // I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT’ FINEST FINISH...AND ITS EDITIND LOVE LOL! IN LACONIC WAY…10+ MS. NIVEDITA UK.
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Sanya Zahid 10 June 2009
Nice one.................................................................
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A love poem with a 'fart' in the middle...interesting....Ha!
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Beverley Fredborg 03 January 2009
I love the idea - you can't edit love. How totally true. This was brilliant.
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Little Hatila ;) 25 December 2008
'Your love is my heart crest. Cant sell it or loose it' loved it....10 Hataw
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Naidz Ladia 18 December 2008
CANT EDIT LOVE...ill agree on that..YOU REALLY CANT EDIT THE POWER OF HEARTS..no one can edit, , neither u or i..nor she or he unless death interefere, , i like ths, promise..
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Yasmine Torres 18 November 2008
hey well since you commented my poem i thought that i should read one of yours :) I love your work! ! ! ! ! ! u r really good :) Thanks again and Lots of Love Yasmine <3
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Janua Catt Alonzo 11 November 2008
wow! what a nice read
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008
'Your love I can never EDIT. I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT.' Very nice poem.10+
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