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‘carnal Apple, Woman Filled, Burning Moon,’

Rating: 3.4

Carnal apple, Woman filled, burning moon,
dark smell of seaweed, crush of mud and light,
what secret knowledge is clasped between your pillars?
What primal night does Man touch with his senses?
Ay, Love is a journey through waters and stars,
through suffocating air, sharp tempests of grain:
Love is a war of lightning,
and two bodies ruined by a single sweetness.
Kiss by kiss I cover your tiny infinity,
your margins, your rivers, your diminutive villages,

and a genital fire, transformed by delight,
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nihoulu Lee 12 June 2012

i jerked it for like an hour to this. his profile pic is sooooo sexy I'm a 12 year old asian.

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Hsiaoshuang Chin 21 November 2012

A woman's body during lovemaking will never look the same again after reading this poem!

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Buyi Newton Philip 14 September 2012

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 November 2011

what secret knowledge is clasped between your pillars? ....... yet untrodden path of secrets fills apple to fall, gravity ramifies anchoring into deep of river, gratified heart to emblazon by light of Venus gloss oh we are just entwined in between floss of hold..................most thought provoking write i have ever read,

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Sushovan Basu 13 April 2012

Only Neruda could write this only Neruda brilliant

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2021

Nothing to say, just loved reading this fabulous piece of poetry!

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A powerful poem, Congratulation on being the Modern Poem Of the day,5 Stars! Amazing poem

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Amit Shukla 18 November 2020

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Gayatri Phukan 11 August 2020

Love is a war of lighting wounderfull

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 November 2018

Love is a war of lightning, and two bodies ruined by a single sweetness. Kiss by kiss I cover your tiny infinity, What other words can express love better than this!

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