Caution! Frequent Stops Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Caution! Frequent Stops

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Please do not approach me and keep a safe distance my dear.
Do not rely on my broken wheels.
This nagging engine is too old for the slippery road.
Please overtake me and I have no any regrets.
My horn is weak as same as the brakes
And I wish you a happy and a safe journey!

[ Lord Jesus also suggested, ' When it seems to you that your suffering exceeds your strength, contemplate my wounds.' (Diary 1184,1152)

* A merry X'mas and seasonal greetings to all my poet friends!

Friday, December 19, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,strength,wounds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 19 December 2008

Very original wishes for the New Year. Excellent use of metaphor. Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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