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Cdn...Series Dwell Not In Total Spirituality - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Dwell not in total
Spirituality

a Dear friend
gave up his life
accidentally and suddenly


searching life afresh in
Death

Sad
I am so sorry
he did not listen
even to me

just meditate
and
keep a mild faith
control your minds

we havea single life
only
I believe

You may

Topic(s) of this poem: birth, death, life and death, poetic expression, spirituality


Poet's Notes about The Poem

We are born
by act of copulation
love divine 'tis
and
genes are needed

Else you know more
I only show a dead rat
to all
You may see
also

Comments about Cdn...Series Dwell Not In Total Spirituality by me poet yeps poet

  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (10/30/2019 9:07:00 PM)

    No spiritual person would advise giving up on life but accident can happen working towards any goal spiritual or worldly. We always have hope for betterment of life and that hope in too strong to believe just in one life. The mystries of soul and mind are too great to understand. (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (10/29/2019 6:47:00 PM)

    EACH ONE IS PERMITTED TO HAVE
    ONES OWN VIEWS
    THE WORLD HAS 7.5 BILLIONS BRAINS
    NO TWO ARE ALIKE
    GREAT POETS YOU KNOW IT
    THANKS LET ME HAVE MY OWN VSION
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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (10/26/2019 12:26:00 AM)

    I tend to agree with poet Akhtar Jawad.
    If the spark from the Almighty has to go back and merge with Him at end the end of evolution called by different names, salvation, liberation, freedom..., and why the whole chakkar! I think life is beautiful if we can make it.
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (10/25/2019 8:55:00 PM)

    , , , , , , , Superb
    just excellent
    the poem is
    A conversation between
    HIM and ye
    BOTH STRANGERS YE

    but believe I must AJ JI SIR THEE
    YOU are more knowledgeable
    than me PP ME
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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (10/25/2019 8:48:00 PM)

    ......Superb
    just excellent
    the poem is
    A conversation between
    HIM and ye
    BOTH STRANGERS YE

    but believe I must AJ JI SIR THEE
    YOU are more knowledgeable
    than me PP ME
    (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (10/25/2019 6:15:00 PM)

    The idea of a single life is rejected by all the beliefs. You may be right but I would prefer to die in the hope of another life. whatever man hoped looked a fantasy but the fantasies become a fact one day. My we meet on another planet with a different form of life as very good friends! (Report)Reply

    Poet PoetPoet Poet(10/26/2019 10:47:00 AM)

    INSHAH ALLAH
    WE MAY
    I WILL MEET THEE
    Just say HIGH AJ JI

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 25, 2019



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