Cdn...Series Dwell Not In Total Spirituality Poem by me poet yeps poet

Cdn...Series Dwell Not In Total Spirituality

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Dwell not in total
Spirituality

a Dear friend
gave up his life
accidentally and suddenly


searching life afresh in
Death

Sad
I am so sorry
he did not listen
even to me

just meditate
and
keep a mild faith
control your minds

we havea single life
only
I believe

You may

Friday, October 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,death,life and death,poetic expression,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We are born
by act of copulation
love divine 'tis
and
genes are needed

Else you know more
I only show a dead rat
to all
You may see
also
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2019

The idea of a single life is rejected by all the beliefs. You may be right but I would prefer to die in the hope of another life. whatever man hoped looked a fantasy but the fantasies become a fact one day. My we meet on another planet with a different form of life as very good friends!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 October 2019

INSHAH ALLAH WE MAY I WILL MEET THEE Just say HIGH AJ JI

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Savita Tyagi 30 October 2019

No spiritual person would advise giving up on life but accident can happen working towards any goal spiritual or worldly. We always have hope for betterment of life and that hope in too strong to believe just in one life. The mystries of soul and mind are too great to understand.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 October 2019

EACH ONE IS PERMITTED TO HAVE ONES OWN VIEWS THE WORLD HAS 7.5 BILLIONS BRAINS NO TWO ARE ALIKE GREAT POETS YOU KNOW IT THANKS LET ME HAVE MY OWN VSION

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 October 2019

I tend to agree with poet Akhtar Jawad. If the spark from the Almighty has to go back and merge with Him at end the end of evolution called by different names, salvation, liberation, freedom..., and why the whole chakkar! I think life is beautiful if we can make it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

, , , , , , , Superb just excellent the poem is A conversation between HIM and ye BOTH STRANGERS YE but believe I must AJ JI SIR THEE YOU are more knowledgeable than me PP ME

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2019

......Superb just excellent the poem is A conversation between HIM and ye BOTH STRANGERS YE but believe I must AJ JI SIR THEE YOU are more knowledgeable than me PP ME

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