Challenge

Rating: 4.3

the white paper
a dot he made
it pulls the mind in
like the man's character -
giving the brain
a challenge
formidable as the
stars, each twinkling
in the dark night

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Ivy Christou 30 April 2008

wow, this is an amazing write. It encaptures so much in so few words.. Well done! HBH

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Jibin Joseph 20 December 2006

beautiful poem great piece of work........

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Tori Ocean 27 January 2006

beautiful. this is one of the best poems i've read on this site. absolutley wonderful work. very good

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