Change, Or Back To Stonehenge Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Change, Or Back To Stonehenge

Rating: 5.0


When winter relented
To say hello to spring,
Grey turned to green and red,
It gave my mind a wing.
Seasons change on their own
And wait not till too late
To kiss change on due date,
Change changes even stone.
Man rather in a pit
Gets frozen against change,
That seems to me no strange.
He last walked on two feet
From four the game to beat—
As ape his greatest feat,
But lost somewhere his wit,
Now on way to Stonehenge!
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Reflections | 06.09.16 |

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Man once beat them all to win the game when he walked on two feet in place of four. But now somewhere down the line something seems strange. He can't change his ways, and seems on way back to Stonehenge.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2019

A very clever poem on change. As they say, change is the only permanent thing in the world. It is inevitable. Yet, some men refuse to accept change.and worst they even went farther....go back to.prehistoric.. A perceptive write brilliantly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Precisely what I said below. Thanks for the feedback.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2019

wonderful maxim- Change changes even stone! // like this

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Well said, stone is far from dead. It is also evolving though may be imperceptibly. Thanks for the feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2019

This is beautifully crafted on change using the word stonehenge. Your poet' s note helps the readers much. Thank you sir for sharing.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Stonehenge, prehistoric structures created by early men klong back. But if no action is taken on planet earth and soon enough we may be heading back to that age. Thank you you

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Godhra - Gujarat
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