Monday, April 1, 2019

Change, Or Back To Stonehenge Comments

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When winter relented
To say hello to spring,
Grey turned to green and red,
It gave my mind a wing.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2019

A very clever poem on change. As they say, change is the only permanent thing in the world. It is inevitable. Yet, some men refuse to accept change.and worst they even went farther....go back to.prehistoric.. A perceptive write brilliantly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Precisely what I said below. Thanks for the feedback.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2019

wonderful maxim- Change changes even stone! // like this

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Well said, stone is far from dead. It is also evolving though may be imperceptibly. Thanks for the feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2019

This is beautifully crafted on change using the word stonehenge. Your poet' s note helps the readers much. Thank you sir for sharing.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Stonehenge, prehistoric structures created by early men klong back. But if no action is taken on planet earth and soon enough we may be heading back to that age. Thank you you

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