Changed My Life... Poem by hazem al jaber

Changed My Life...

Rating: 5.0


Changed my life...



sweetheart...
another life i live now..
you changed my day..
changed my dreams...
changed my life...
wiped a sadness away..
sowed a happiness into my heart..
and changed the way which i used to live...
an old memory ended since the day we met...
owned the mind and heart...
and became the lover to my heart...
my heart which choose you...

sweetheart...
a happiness knew my path...
knocked my door...
brought with to my lonely heart...
the hope and a joyful, since i met you...
came to me with a salvation...
to carry out all my sadness...
and to start giving a happiness with the day we met...

sweet lady...
because of you...
i changed...
even my pen changed too..
i started to see every thing in an another way...
started to feel bliss from any letter i read and write...
my pen even too forgot a sadness after i met you...
happily this pen became, to started write a love for you...
even this pen vowed, to never to write a sadness any more...
just will write a happiness only to us...
and will draw our love in the heart of our sky...
so every one will see and realize...
how madly we are, one to other...

sweetheart..
you changed me..
changed my life..
and stopped all my dreams...
no more dreams any more..
just reality...
this reality which we live now..
now and forever...

sweetheart...
into your heart...
the most place..
which i would always be...

by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 22 August 2009

the sweetest and endearing love poem i have ever read in your page...i felt the sincerity all over the page....could this be to the one loving friend i know? ? ? 10+++++++++

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a real change in this poem. differently done..liked it

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Lady Grace 25 August 2009

HMMM. time changes many things hon...ur piece is absolutely presentable..it speaks love but it speaks more on changes occurs in your life...there you'll be..lav this piece my haj..

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Christie Garcia 22 August 2009

Love is so true and real. What incredible expression! Awesome Poem! !

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Rehana Nazli 22 August 2009

wow..change brings change.; a ripple effect, chain reaction. good flow but feels too long to keep following the lines..lovely expression though; free flowing.

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Marieta Maglas 22 August 2009

''sweetheart... another life i live now.. you changed my day.. changed my dreams... changed my life... wiped a sadness away..'' it is a wonderful poem, Hazem, a wonderful lyric poem of love.Your lady may be so proud and happy..10++++

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Seema Aarella 22 August 2009

The tender thoughts that love emotes! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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