Childhood Poem-10 Poem by soulful heart

Childhood Poem-10

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A rabbit liked very much to tease
He would take everything in ease.
He was fond of carrots and green dates
And would annoy all jungle- mates.
All were troubled of him.
One day he died
But there was nobody who cried.

Friday, October 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
one of my earliest poems, i don't even remember when i had written it but its in my oldest fadad diary.....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2016

Imagery! With the ways of mankind compared to the rabbit. Thanks for sharing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 October 2014

Yeah dis was a fun super poem in jolly rhyme. It can relate to selfish humans too. U wrote dis in childhood u mean?

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Heather Wilkins 09 October 2014

nicely written childhood poem enjoyed

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Valsa George 04 October 2014

The child in you had such wonderful talent for rhyming poetry ! ! !

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