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My Childhood Poem Collection -1

Rating: 4.9

Have you ever seen?
Have you ever been?
Where I live, its home
Here my first smile shone.

Some day I will leave it
To soar over new summit.
Then will I be all alone,
In my future dream home?

Saturday, September 20, 2014
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Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I hv decided to share a few of chilhood poem....they are childish...i know but a child will compose childish only..isn't it? Hope you all like them...just remember your chilhood for once....: -)
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2014

A lovely and nice start of attractive poems.10

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Valsa George 21 September 2014

Very sweet! Very meaningful. too... rhyming also! Even as a child you had a glimpse of a home in the summit where you 'll go all alone leaving your earthly home!

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Ging Taping 04 October 2014

Still there's no place like home

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Amitava Sur 24 September 2014

Though you wrote that it's your childhood poem, but it's a very matured one and fine too. I wish you not to be alone in your new home even! !

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Dave Walker 22 September 2014

A great poem, to revisit once past writings can show how far you have come in life and in writing.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 March 2020

The poem was written in your childhood, but it is not at all childish. Even as a child you had the vision of soaring over a new 'summit', that's really wonderful!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2017

nice one.... good childhood memory...10 childhood spent in neighborhood with all friends till attained adulthood

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Adeline Foster 14 July 2016

Yes a very good poem about childhood. Read mine - - Home Is - Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 03 November 2014

the first home is most remembered lovely thought

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Alesia Leach 02 November 2014

That was lovely. Well penned. I hope you are not alone in your new home though.

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