Have you ever seen?
Have you ever been?
Where I live, its home
Here my first smile shone.
Some day I will leave it
To soar over new summit.
Then will I be all alone,
In my future dream home?
Although you have written this poem when you were a child but believe me it is not childish at all, I loved it, keep on sharing more if you have :)
A great poem, to revisit once past writings can show how far you have come in life and in writing.
Though you wrote that it's your childhood poem, but it's a very matured one and fine too. I wish you not to be alone in your new home even! !
The poem was written in your childhood, but it is not at all childish. Even as a child you had the vision of soaring over a new 'summit', that's really wonderful!
nice one.... good childhood memory...10 childhood spent in neighborhood with all friends till attained adulthood
Yes a very good poem about childhood. Read mine - - Home Is - Adeline
That was lovely. Well penned. I hope you are not alone in your new home though.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very sweet! Very meaningful. too... rhyming also! Even as a child you had a glimpse of a home in the summit where you 'll go all alone leaving your earthly home!