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Birds

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Birds are god's creation,
Various of them have no combination,

They sing every morning,
Which is a refreshening warning,

To catch their early early prey,
All day they have to play,

Looking for food for their little nestlings,

Watching them do this is very interesting,
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Erica Johnson 24 November 2009

good poem you used the imagination to draw a picture of birds. Your level of writing is very good. keep up the good work and i cant wait to see your reach the depth of poetry. -love peace and joy

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Omar Ibrahim 24 November 2009

you wrote like birds! ! i don't know how but it looked like a bird...very sweet and vivid..

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Kaitlyn Bell 23 November 2009

This is a very good poem. I suggest that you capitalize 'God'. Other than that it is a very amazing poem. You have the heart of a poet. :)

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Eyan Desir 23 November 2009

I see you did your home work well

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